The
Research
II
Voortrekkers
of the Sagebrush
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The
in-depth research for The Covenant covered three distinct
phases:
Primary
Michener's ongoing and intensive reading and information-gathering in
South Africa was supplemented by my research on special topics as with
the examples from my September 9 note(above.)
In
addition to these broad backgrounders, Jim began his draft by writing
several crucial passages for the book. These key paragraphs were given
to me for detailed analysis.
Expert
Readers
As
the draft manuscript emerged, copies were sent to expert readers in
South Africa. These went out with a covering note from Michener:
| TO
ALL READERS
This
manuscript is being submitted to you in hopes that you will
give it your most careful attention. Absolutely everything is
up for review: the data from your field of expertise; the language;
the customs; the inferences; and above all any general facts
which might be in error.
I
would appreciate your guidance on even the most minute points,
as I always strive to avoid ridiculous error.
A
good way to submit your comment is to correct on the page any
small item. On larger items, or those deserving an essay-type
observation, it is good to mark the offending passage in the
left-hand margin with an Arabic 1, 2, 3 etc. not necessarily
in order, but starting with 1 on each new page. Then at your
typewriter, indicate 1-3 which means Page 1, Item 3, and go
ahead.
Thank
you for your assistance.
James A. Michener |
Fifteen
draft chapters were sent to twenty-two South African experts, except
sections dealing with apartheid which Michener and I kept close to our
chests. Bateman also added his comments to six of the fifteen chapters,
as well as continuing his role as our legman, providing excellent background
material from the South African National Library and his own extensive
historical collection.
Major
critique
Jim
wrote his first draft of The Covenant over eleven months between
October 1978 and August 1979, sending me the original chapters as he
finished them. Except for my initial comments on key paragraphs, he
let me know that he wouldn't concern himself with my criticisms and
suggestions until the manuscript was complete.
This
is, of course, exactly how a writer should forge ahead with a rough
draft and avoid the danger of being bogged down by revisions.
I did
a line-by-line check of the manuscript, plus a broad critique of each
chapter to point out any major difficulties in the flavor and thrust of
the text. My commentaries frequently ran at greater length than Michener's
drafts and went into far more depth than the expert overviews. The South
African readers' comments, as well as Bateman's suggested corrections
on selected chapters, were incorporated with my reports. My
exhaustive and painstaking research reflected a personal obligation
to get the South African story right at a critical point in the history
of my birthplace. I'd been a writer and editor in South Africa for close
on fifteen years and all too often saw the facts about our past and
present totally distorted, especially by outsiders.
I
also knew that when the time came to review the rough draft, I would
be sitting opposite James. A. Michener, a giant of American letters.
If I was going to challenge Jim's words and opinions, and toss out chunks
of his work, I had to be ready for the skirmishes and the bigger battles
sure to follow.
Of
course, I kept in mind that Michener wasn't writing a history, as he
pointed out in a note before we began our work on the manuscript: "It
is important for me and everyone to remember that I am writing a novel
and have no obligation to cover all developments, and none at all unless
they coincide with my purpose and send forward my narrative."
These
three examples show the extensive historical research behind a novel
like The Covenant, or as the adage says, the ninety percent
perspiration and ten percent inspiration of genius.
Primary
Research
One
of the first drafts Michener sent me for research was a comparison of
the continents and their relationship to the various settler groups
who landed there:
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the Dutchmen from the Cape took their first hesitant steps eastward
and northward into the great continent at whose edge they perched,
it would be profitable to inspect what kind of land they had
inherited and to realize how limited and hostile it was. Settlement
could not be extended to the northwest, for there lay the Namibian
Desert, a cruel boundary, and it would be difficult to penetrate
the vast region of the northeast, because this contained the
Kalahari, less formidable than the Namibian, but also a desert.
To the east and northeast ran the towering Drakensberg Mountains,
many of the peaks over ten thousand feet high, protected by
precipitous valleys almost impassable.
But
the wasteland of Australia, the Rocky Mountains of North America,
and the blizzard weather of Siberia proved no natural impediment
could stop men from moving outward if they were determined to
go. And in time the adventurous Cape Dutch would conquer their
Kalahari and Drakensberg. What really set limits to their population
and their economic growth was not the formidable land to the
north but the missing land to the south...
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Pleasantville,
New York
November
21, 1978
Dear
Jim,
Herewith
another batch of comments, thoughts, notes etc. on the theme
"The Promised Land - Limited or Horizonless?" It also looks
at the question of the vanishing wildlife and the changes
that came to the wilderness with the advent of the plough,
the gun, barbed wire
Of
course, viewed in the broad context your comparisons with
other continents are fine: I just have this nagging doubt
about some of the specific statements that emerge.the limited
natural endowment etc. The Namib, the Kalahari were indeed
there. Yet, far greater, was the extent of the Living Veld
- the Eden so many early travelers speak of.
So,
I offer these notes from numerous sources for your consideration.
A
personal note: I'll be away December 9-17 learning something
of America! Digest editors are allowed a one-week educational
trip anywhere in the country. I've chosen Muncie, Indiana
- Middletown, USA! It should give me a good chance to sound
out the grassroots level of life here.
Errol
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The
Promised Land - Limited or Horizonless?
ELU
Research Report, November 21, 1978
(from
numerous sources; illustrations added to web site)
In
a broad "sub-continental" sense, the "limits of expansion" comparison
is acceptable. I'm certain you've already considered many of the comments
that follow: They're of a qualifying rather than definitive revision
nature. (Certainly, I begin to grasp the broader Michener vision of
things and am cautious about dismantling what is essentially an enlightened,
fresh perspective.)
But
what worried me on successive readings of the section were some of the
descriptions of the land the Dutchmen inherited: Limited and hostile;
one of the world's deprived areas; the wealth which had been created
in the vast temperate zones of the continents could no be duplicated
in South Africa; no matter how diligently the Dutch worked, working
always with a limited endowment; but did transform these deficiencies
into assets. Hostile, challenging, demanding... Yes. Limited —
?
(What
follows will also cover your query about the vanishing wildlife.)
An
initial approach would be to try and draw a picture of what the veld
looked like when those early pioneers arrived. The work of botanist
John Acocks gives us a clue. His veld maps show, for example, extent
of the lush, sweet grassveld in 1400 and in 1954:

Botanical
map by John Acocks shows estimated extent of sweet grassveld
in year 1400
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Map
of sweet grassveld areas today tells a sad story of the
advance of the desert
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Once
the sweet grasslands billowed all the way from Somerset East to Bethal.
Many of the first missionaries, travelers and hunters have told how
they found millions of head of game grazing up to their bellies in the
grass that grew tall when the rains were good, or how the animals trekked,
driven by the hunger madness in the great droughts when the grass did
not become lush and green.
Through
the ages the grass roots helped by the cold nights and warm days and
the heavy thunderstorms also "made" the soil of this plateau, which
lies between 4,500 to 6,000 feet above the sea. Here Nature 'farmed'
with her wild animals and 150 species of grasses of the region. Then
men came - killed the game with guns, grazed the grasses with cattle
and sheep, and ploughed the soil that was mostly sandy or sandy loam.
In the lands where maize grew, the soil lost the structure of crumbs
given to it by the roots of the grasses and it became so sandy that
it was easily washed away by water or carried by the strong winter winds.
The cattle grazed far and wide and ate only the most palatable grasses
so that their place was taken by harder type. The veld was also kept
short by the sheep and the good grasses did not come into seed.
The
second map shows the small patch of sweet grassveld left today. The
place of this grassveld, which is disappearing just like the herds of
game, is being taken by the Karoo type and behind this again comes the
desert. At the present rate of advance the Karoo will have reached the
Vaal River and the desert will be as far as Bloemfontein in 50 years
time. Then we will probably have a little sweet grassveld left in the
black turf soils around Standerton and Bethal.
- "The
fairest Cape the Dutch moved into had more than 2,000 different
flowering plants, 170 grasses and 240 rush-like plants between Table
Mountain and Cape Point - more flowering plants than in the British
Isles."

Landing
of Van Riebeeck 1652, Charles Bell
South
African National Library
- "Some
scientists believe that a great part of the eastern side of South
Africa was still solid forest only 500 years ago. They think all
Natal, for instance, was forest from the Drakensberg to the sea...
moist evergreen forest with huge trees and dryer forest with smaller
trees in the valleys. Then the Bantu entered the country with their
huts built of clay-covered poles made from young trees and their
stock. In time of drought, their fires killed large stretches of
forest, letting in the grasslands we see today. White settlers arrived
and chopped out most of the remaining forests for firewood, furniture,
houses, wagons and even ships. Today, few countries in the world
have as little forest left as South Africa."
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Chapter
Overview
The
Trekboers
(from
numerous sources; illustrations added to web site)
This
example of my broad commentary on Michener's draft covers Chapter V
of The Covenant, The Trekboers, nomadic pastoralists who were
the forerunners of the Voortrekkers, the Dutch pioneers who forsook
the Cape Colony and trekked north in the 1830s.

Karoo
Trekboer, by Charles Bell
Trekboers - Chapter V11 1 - 139
ELU/October 1979
Specific
comments appear on text pages
General
Overview for discussion at revision stage:
The
picture given of a trekboer (most sources use lower case 't')
- "wandering farmers who carelessly tilled a piece of land
for nine or ten years, then abandoned it for a better piece
of new land forty miles farther east... they practiced the
most abusive type of agriculture" - misses important
aspects of the trekboer phenomena.
The
trekboers were nomadic pastoralists; what land they 'tilled'
was usually for their private needs and minimal. Some pointers
from Keppel-Jones:
Three
groups of colonists we are concerned with:
Inhabitants of Cape Town - townsmen (as distinct from Compagnie
officials)
Settled wheat and vine farmers - stable and fairly civilized
Pastoralists of the interior - veeboere i.e. trekboers
"Life
on the cattle posts had great attraction for young men. It
was a life of adventure, of brushes with San and Khoikhoi,
of plunder perhaps, of release from the trammel of civilization.
"Newer
farmers were to a large extent the old farmers sons and ticket-of-leave
soldiers accustomed to frontier life. Pastoralist was not
tied to one spot. Families in the snow covered Roggeveld or
Nieuwveld Mountains trekked down in winter and spring to the
Karoo plains and returned to the high altitudes before heat
and drought of summer. Children who had been rocked to sleep
by the jolting of the wagon grew up with the thought of migrating
to the north or east to find homes for themselves. The trekboer
had adapted himself to the pace of the ox."
Important
to consider the term the trekboer moved into with his cattle
and sheep. Monica Cole has, for example, a chart of drought
stricken areas in 1926-39. Aside from the southwestern Cape
and an area encompassing the fertile Garden Route, rest of
province was declared drought-stricken for 30 to 60 months,
and a major portion -typical trekboer territory - for
60 months and over.
South
Africa is periodically affected by severe and prolonged droughts.
The rainless years of the 30's culminated in the disastrous
year of 33/34 when stock losses ran into the millions. The
bane of the farmers is the country's unreliable and unpredictable
rainfall. Over much of the country large fluctuations are
the rule rather than the exception. Years with a below average
figure are more common than years with an above-average rainfall.
The
habit of trekking was thus not simply tied to wasteful ruination
of the veld, but a necessity dictated by weather and water
availability. A trekboer may have had a 'base' - for the long
period Hendrik has - but at very regular intervals he would
have had to move his animals to more supportive pastures.
Also, while the 'smoke from another man's chimney,' might
be symbolic of encroachment, a more important motive was to
keep away from Compagnie rule - to savor the independent,
untrammeled existence offered by the beckoning wilderness.
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Chapter
Line-by-Line Review
Chapter
VII, The Voortrekkers
(from
numerous sources; illustrations added to web site)
In
my overview of The Voortrekker draft, I commented:
"Not one of characters, Tjaart Van Doorn, Naude, Bronk, Nel etc. even
suggest picture of 'frontier Boer' - i.e. the wilder, independent,
hard as nails individual. What we have is picture that evokes American
Centennial-type character + the Pennsylvania Dutch.
Unsettling
frontier element isn't there, the balance between Bible-living Van
Doorns and wild renegade types, which if time allowed, I'd show in
50/50 proportion, is lacking.
We
have a stylized Afrikaner-heroic interpretation = Good enough for
the past and Nathan (Manfred Nathan, The Voortrekkers of South
Africa, 1937) but inadequate for 1980.
In
addition, we have scant reference to the dominant issue then
and now, i.e. LABOR.
Sure,
one might argue that the American reader only needs simplistic view.
But it's wrong to offer it this simply. It just wasn't so."

My
line-by-line comments on the vital Voortrekker chapter comprised fifty
pages plus numerous side notes. Here is a sampling from the first seven
pages of my report.
| The
Voortrekkers
- Chapter X ELU/
October 1979
Since
the story of the Voortrekkers is regarded as the central point
in the story of the Afrikaners, it would seem essential that
one offers an account that remains as faithful to history as
possible. There are many problems in this chapter, and for this
reason it is preferable to deal with them at length.
(
1.1. The first figure is the page number/second is comment
reference number)
(
C - comment only/ not indicative of an inaccuracy)
1.1.C.
The Voortrekkers
The
word only came into use 40 years after The Great Trek. Originally,
they called themselves 'emigrants'.
1.2.
In 1833 Tjaart van Doorn was about as
happy as a man could be.
Until
now, the Van Doorn family have been at the forefront of the
movements that have led to the development of a) free burghers
b) trekboers and, consequently, the 'Voortrekkers". In
the middle of 1834: the three 'Commissie Treks' -
Uys/Johannes Pretorius/Scholtz - set out to investigate lands
to the north. This was virtually the final step
before the Great Trek. So that, aside from the possible respite
offered by Cole and d'Urban's actions (below), minds were made
up on the unsuitability of remaining on the frontier. Van Doorn's
happiness would be most exceptional. (See problems listed below.)
1.3
frocked coat
Walker/Nathan.
Their trousers met the tails of their jackets/ short jackets
and flapping trousers of various lengths, some coming down to
the insteps, while others were well above the ankles. Wide belt
and suspenders.
1.4
last of the trekboers
As
explained in last chapter, this is incorrect: the trekboer movement
was to continue into this century. At this period, there
were many trekboers, especially in the northern regions of Graaff- Reinet
district, where the Van Doorns live. The trekboer phenomena
and the Great Trek were parallel - both complimentary and apart
from each other. For instance, there were by this time numbers
of trekboers 'settled' - i.e. using pastures - across the Orange
River in the Griqua/Bushman/Basuto lands. Many of these did
not join the trek and continued to regard themselves as subjects
of the colony.
1.5
the old wandering days
of the Boers were past
As
above, no. It was the whole concept of wandering, nomadism,
of easy land acquisition that was to play such an important
role in the Great Trek. It was not simply a 'wanderlust' but
a way of life, inbred over generations.
1.6
What Tjaart had done
was accumulate much pasturage beyond the hills
This
contradicts one of the basic reasons for the trek - if not the
reason: land shortage. Some pointers to the background:
Little
land had been granted since 1807 when the government was giving
consideration to a new system of tenure: loan-place to quit-rent
etc."
In
1813 Cradock said that he had at least 3,000 petitions for land.
In
1824 there were over 1,000 petitions for land in the Graaff
Reinet district, by the end of that year only 140,352 morgen
had been granted
in the district.
In
Graaff Reinet by the end of 1822, of 392 convertible loan farms
56 had been converted, and a further 301 applications were on
file. As their petitions for new land were not dealt with until
the titles of converted loan farms had been issued, and as few
Boers had titles for their converted loan farms, they were unable
legally to occupy new land. There arose 'request' places: land
for which petitions had been submitted to the government, with
the approval of the landrost, who often registered the claim
in his books, although the government condemned the practice.
In Graaff Reinet in 1824, there were at least 1,000 request
places. (It is interesting to note that of the 19 men from the
rural areas of the district who were reported to have joined
the Great Trek by early 1837, 15 were described as having no
fixed place of residence.)
By
1836, only 706 conversions on loan farms had been made which
meant that there were still 1500 loan farms dating back to before
1813.
Meanwhile
in 1832 the government, under orders from the Colonial Office,
announced that all land applied for after 9 January 1832 would
be sold only by public auction. Several historians emphasize
this 'auction' decision in grievance list. There is much more
material available to show the tremendous pressure that had
arisen in the area of land usage/availability. Thus when d'Urban
annexed 'Queen Adelaide Province,' the move was greatly welcomed
by hundreds of land-hungry Boers who, at last, saw an advance
of the frontier and the possibility of new farms. There are
records of two, three Boer families at this time being 'forced'
to exist on what their forefathers would've regarded as one
unit i.e. 6,000 morgen. [approx 12,000 acres.]
The
pressure on land had been aggravated by their family system.
Though the Van Doorns don't typify it, it's a fact that families
of a dozen children were the rule rather than the exception.
When a son reached his age of independence, having by that time
acquired his own horse, gun and small herd, it was traditional
that he set his eyes to the east, to a loan place of his own
and there establish his family till the same diffusion process
started. (Of course, one sees an identical parallel in what
was happening on the other side of the border with the young
Xhosa herdsman who set out to establish his own kraal.) Now
that the black barrier had stopped such an easy 'inheritance',
and that people knew that to the immediate north lay the semi-Karoo
and Karoo, there was bound to be a land shortage increased by
the hour as Boer babies were born. In contrast to America, the
whole impetus up to this generation was 'Go East!' - and thousands
had.
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