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WORKING WITH MICHENER

The Making of The Covenant

 

 

Errol Lincoln Uys and James A. Michener

 

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The Research

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Voortrekkers of the Sagebrush

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The in-depth research for The Covenant covered three distinct phases:

Primary

Michener's ongoing and intensive reading and information-gathering in South Africa was supplemented by my research on special topics as with the examples from my September 9 note(above.)

 

In addition to these broad backgrounders, Jim began his draft by writing several crucial passages for the book. These key paragraphs were given to me for detailed analysis.

 

Expert Readers

As the draft manuscript emerged, copies were sent to expert readers in South Africa. These went out with a covering note from Michener:

TO ALL READERS

This manuscript is being submitted to you in hopes that you will give it your most careful attention. Absolutely everything is up for review: the data from your field of expertise; the language; the customs; the inferences; and above all any general facts which might be in error.

 

I would appreciate your guidance on even the most minute points, as I always strive to avoid ridiculous error.

 

A good way to submit your comment is to correct on the page any small item. On larger items, or those deserving an essay-type observation, it is good to mark the offending passage in the left-hand margin with an Arabic 1, 2, 3 etc. not necessarily in order, but starting with 1 on each new page. Then at your typewriter, indicate 1-3 which means Page 1, Item 3, and go ahead.

 

Thank you for your assistance.

 

                    James A. Michener

 

Fifteen draft chapters were sent to twenty-two South African experts, except sections dealing with apartheid which Michener and I kept close to our chests. Bateman also added his comments to six of the fifteen chapters, as well as continuing his role as our legman, providing excellent background material from the South African National Library and his own extensive historical collection.

Major critique

Jim wrote his first draft of The Covenant over eleven months between October 1978 and August 1979, sending me the original chapters as he finished them. Except for my initial comments on key paragraphs, he let me know that he wouldn't concern himself with my criticisms and suggestions until the manuscript was complete.

 

This is, of course, exactly how a writer should forge ahead with a rough draft and avoid the danger of being bogged down by revisions.

 

I did a line-by-line check of the manuscript, plus a broad critique of each chapter to point out any major difficulties in the flavor and thrust of the text. My commentaries frequently ran at greater length than Michener's drafts and went into far more depth than the expert overviews. The South African readers' comments, as well as Bateman's suggested corrections on selected chapters, were incorporated with my reports.

My exhaustive and painstaking research reflected a personal obligation to get the South African story right at a critical point in the history of my birthplace. I'd been a writer and editor in South Africa for close on fifteen years and all too often saw the facts about our past and present totally distorted, especially by outsiders.

 

I also knew that when the time came to review the rough draft, I would be sitting opposite James. A. Michener, a giant of American letters. If I was going to challenge Jim's words and opinions, and toss out chunks of his work, I had to be ready for the skirmishes and the bigger battles sure to follow.

Of course, I kept in mind that Michener wasn't writing a history, as he pointed out in a note before we began our work on the manuscript: "It is important for me and everyone to remember that I am writing a novel and have no obligation to cover all developments, and none at all unless they coincide with my purpose and send forward my narrative."

 

These three examples show the extensive historical research behind a novel like The Covenant, or as the adage says, the ninety percent perspiration and ten percent inspiration of genius.

 

Primary Research

 

One of the first drafts Michener sent me for research was a comparison of the continents and their relationship to the various settler groups who landed there:

As the Dutchmen from the Cape took their first hesitant steps eastward and northward into the great continent at whose edge they perched, it would be profitable to inspect what kind of land they had inherited and to realize how limited and hostile it was. Settlement could not be extended to the northwest, for there lay the Namibian Desert, a cruel boundary, and it would be difficult to penetrate the vast region of the northeast, because this contained the Kalahari, less formidable than the Namibian, but also a desert. To the east and northeast ran the towering Drakensberg Mountains, many of the peaks over ten thousand feet high, protected by precipitous valleys almost impassable.

 

But the wasteland of Australia, the Rocky Mountains of North America, and the blizzard weather of Siberia proved no natural impediment could stop men from moving outward if they were determined to go. And in time the adventurous Cape Dutch would conquer their Kalahari and Drakensberg. What really set limits to their population and their economic growth was not the formidable land to the north but the missing land to the south...  Click to read more

 

 

Pleasantville, New York

November 21, 1978

Dear Jim,

Herewith another batch of comments, thoughts, notes etc. on the theme "The Promised Land - Limited or Horizonless?" It also looks at the question of the vanishing wildlife and the changes that came to the wilderness with the advent of the plough, the gun, barbed wire

 

Of course, viewed in the broad context your comparisons with other continents are fine: I just have this nagging doubt about some of the specific statements that emerge.the limited natural endowment etc. The Namib, the Kalahari were indeed there. Yet, far greater, was the extent of the Living Veld - the Eden so many early travelers speak of.

 

So, I offer these notes from numerous sources for your consideration.

A personal note: I'll be away December 9-17 learning something of America! Digest editors are allowed a one-week educational trip anywhere in the country. I've chosen Muncie, Indiana - Middletown, USA! It should give me a good chance to sound out the grassroots level of life here.

Errol

 

 

 

The Promised Land - Limited or Horizonless?

ELU Research Report, November 21, 1978

(from numerous sources; illustrations added to web site)

 

 

In a broad "sub-continental" sense, the "limits of expansion" comparison is acceptable. I'm certain you've already considered many of the comments that follow: They're of a qualifying rather than definitive revision nature. (Certainly, I begin to grasp the broader Michener vision of things and am cautious about dismantling what is essentially an enlightened, fresh perspective.)

 

But what worried me on successive readings of the section were some of the descriptions of the land the Dutchmen inherited: Limited and hostile; one of the world's deprived areas; the wealth which had been created in the vast temperate zones of the continents could no be duplicated in South Africa; no matter how diligently the Dutch worked, working always with a limited endowment; but did transform these deficiencies into assets. Hostile, challenging, demanding... Yes. Limited — ?

 

(What follows will also cover your query about the vanishing wildlife.)

 

An initial approach would be to try and draw a picture of what the veld looked like when those early pioneers arrived. The work of botanist John Acocks gives us a clue. His veld maps show, for example, extent of the lush, sweet grassveld in 1400 and in 1954:

Botanical map by John Acocks shows estimated extent of sweet grassveld in year 1400

Map of sweet grassveld areas today tells a sad story of  the advance of the desert

 

 

Once the sweet grasslands billowed all the way from Somerset East to Bethal. Many of the first missionaries, travelers and hunters have told how they found millions of head of game grazing up to their bellies in the grass that grew tall when the rains were good, or how the animals Living Veld South Africatrekked, driven by the hunger madness in the great droughts when the grass did not become lush and green.

 

Through the ages the grass roots helped by the cold nights and warm days and the heavy thunderstorms also "made" the soil of this plateau, which lies between 4,500 to 6,000 feet above the sea. Here Nature 'farmed' with her wild animals and 150 species of grasses of the region. Then men came - killed the game with guns, grazed the grasses with cattle and sheep, and ploughed the soil that was mostly sandy or sandy loam. In the lands where maize grew, the soil lost the structure of crumbs given to it by the roots of the grasses and it became so sandy that it was easily washed away by water or carried by the strong winter winds. The cattle grazed far and wide and ate only the most palatable grasses so that their place was taken by harder type. The veld was also kept short by the sheep and the good grasses did not come into seed.

 

The second map shows the small patch of sweet grassveld left today. The place of this grassveld, which is disappearing just like the herds of game, is being taken by the Karoo type and behind this again comes the desert. At the present rate of advance the Karoo will have reached the Vaal River and the desert will be as far as Bloemfontein in 50 years time. Then we will probably have a little sweet grassveld left in the black turf soils around Standerton and Bethal.

  • "The fairest Cape the Dutch moved into had more than 2,000 different flowering plants, 170 grasses and 240 rush-like plants between Table Mountain and Cape Point - more flowering plants than in the British Isles."

Landing of Van Riebeeck 1652, Charles Bell

South African National Library

 

  • "Some scientists believe that a great part of the eastern side of South Africa was still solid forest only 500 years ago. They think all Natal, for instance, was forest from the Drakensberg to the sea... moist evergreen forest with huge trees and dryer forest with smaller trees in the valleys. Then the Bantu entered the country with their huts built of clay-covered poles made from young trees and their stock. In time of drought, their fires killed large stretches of forest, letting in the grasslands we see today. White settlers arrived and chopped out most of the remaining forests for firewood, furniture, houses, wagons and even ships. Today, few countries in the world have as little forest left as South Africa."

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Chapter Overview

The Trekboers

(from numerous sources; illustrations added to web site)

 

This example of my broad commentary on Michener's draft covers Chapter V of The Covenant, The Trekboers, nomadic pastoralists who were the forerunners of the Voortrekkers, the Dutch pioneers who forsook the Cape Colony and trekked north in the 1830s.

 

 

Karoo Trekboer, by Charles Bell

 

      Trekboers - Chapter V11 1 - 139     ELU/October 1979                                   

 

Specific comments appear on text pages

General Overview for discussion at revision stage:

 

The picture given of a trekboer (most sources use lower case 't') - "wandering farmers who carelessly tilled a piece of land for nine or ten years, then abandoned it for a better piece of new land forty miles farther east... they practiced the most abusive type of agriculture" - misses important aspects of the trekboer phenomena.

 

The trekboers were nomadic pastoralists; what land they 'tilled' was usually for their private needs and minimal. Some pointers from Keppel-Jones:

 

Three groups of colonists we are concerned with:

 •  Inhabitants of Cape Town - townsmen (as distinct from Compagnie officials)

 •  Settled wheat and vine farmers - stable and fairly civilized

 •  Pastoralists of the interior - veeboere i.e. trekboers

 

"Life on the cattle posts had great attraction for young men. It was a life of adventure, of brushes with San and Khoikhoi, of plunder perhaps, of release from the trammel of civilization.

 

"Newer farmers were to a large extent the old farmers sons and ticket-of-leave soldiers accustomed to frontier life. Pastoralist was not tied to one spot. Families in the snow covered Roggeveld or Nieuwveld Mountains trekked down in winter and spring to the Karoo plains and returned to the high altitudes before heat and drought of summer. Children who had been rocked to sleep by the jolting of the wagon grew up with the thought of migrating to the north or east to find homes for themselves. The trekboer had adapted himself to the pace of the ox."

 

Important to consider the term the trekboer moved into with his cattle and sheep. Monica Cole has, for example, a chart of drought stricken areas in 1926-39. Aside from the southwestern Cape and an area encompassing the fertile Garden Route, rest of province was declared drought-stricken for 30 to 60 months, and a major portion -­typical trekboer territory - for 60 months and over.

 

South Africa is periodically affected by severe and prolonged droughts. The rainless years of the 30's culminated in the disastrous year of 33/34 when stock losses ran into the millions. The bane of the farmers is the country's unreliable and unpredictable rainfall. Over much of the country large fluctuations are the rule rather than the exception. Years with a below average figure are more common than years with an above-average rainfall.

The habit of trekking was thus not simply tied to wasteful ruination of the veld, but a necessity dictated by weather and water availability. A trekboer may have had a 'base' - for the long period Hendrik has - but at very regular intervals he would have had to move his animals to more supportive pastures. Also, while the 'smoke from another man's chimney,' might be symbolic of encroachment, a more important motive was to keep away from Compagnie rule - to savor the independent, untrammeled existence offered by the beckoning wilderness.

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Chapter Line-by-Line Review

Chapter VII, The Voortrekkers

(from numerous sources; illustrations added to web site)

 

In my overview of The Voortrekker draft, I commented:

"Not one of characters, Tjaart Van Doorn, Naude, Bronk, Nel etc. even suggest picture of 'frontier Boer' - i.e. the wilder, independent, hard as nails individual. What we have is picture that evokes American Centennial-type character + the Pennsylvania Dutch.

 

Unsettling frontier element isn't there, the balance between Bible-living Van Doorns and wild renegade types, which if time allowed, I'd show in 50/50 proportion, is lacking.

We have a stylized Afrikaner-heroic interpretation = Good enough for the past and Nathan (Manfred Nathan, The Voortrekkers of South Africa, 1937) but inadequate for 1980.

In addition, we have scant reference to the dominant issue then and now, i.e. LABOR.

Sure, one might argue that the American reader only needs simplistic view. But it's wrong to offer it this simply. It just wasn't so."

Voortrekkers Satour, reproduced in Reader's Digest Illustrated Guide to Southern Africa

 

My line-by-line comments on the vital Voortrekker chapter comprised fifty pages plus numerous side notes. Here is a sampling from the first seven pages of my report.

 

The Voortrekkers - Chapter X               ELU/ October 1979

 

 

Since the story of the Voortrekkers is regarded as the central point in the story of the Afrikaners, it would seem essential that one offers an account that remains as faithful to history as possible. There are many problems in this chapter, and for this reason it is preferable to deal with them at length.

 

( 1.1. The first figure is the page number/second is comment reference number)

( C - comment only/ not indicative of an inaccuracy)

 

1.1.C. The Voortrekkers

The word only came into use 40 years after The Great Trek. Originally, they called themselves 'emigrants'.

 

1.2. In 1833 Tjaart van Doorn was about as happy as a man could be.

 

Until now, the Van Doorn family have been at the forefront of the movements that have led to the development of a) free burghers b) trekboers and, consequently, the 'Voortrekkers". In the middle of 1834: the three 'Commissie Treks' - Uys/Johannes Pretorius/Scholtz - set out to investigate lands to the north. This was virtually the final step before the Great Trek. So that, aside from the possible respite offered by Cole and d'Urban's actions (below), minds were made up on the unsuitability of remaining on the frontier. Van Doorn's happiness would be most exceptional. (See problems listed below.)

 

1.3 frocked coat

 

Walker/Nathan. Their trousers met the tails of their jackets/ short jackets and flapping trousers of various lengths, some coming down to the insteps, while others were well above the ankles. Wide belt and suspenders.

 

1.4 last of the trekboers

 

As explained in last chapter, this is incorrect: the trekboer movement was to continue into this century. At this period, there were many trekboers, especially in the northern regions of Graaff-Trekboers, by Samuel Daniell from de.wikipedia.orgReinet district, where the Van Doorns live. The trekboer phenomena and the Great Trek were parallel - both complimentary and apart from each other. For instance, there were by this time numbers of trekboers 'settled' - i.e. using pastures - across the Orange River in the Griqua/Bushman/Basuto lands. Many of these did not join the trek and continued to regard themselves as subjects of the colony.

 

1.5 the old wandering days of the Boers were past

 

As above, no. It was the whole concept of wandering, nomadism, of easy land acquisition that was to play such an important role in the Great Trek. It was not simply a 'wanderlust' but a way of life, inbred over generations.

 

1.6 What Tjaart had done was accumulate much pasturage beyond the hills

 

This contradicts one of the basic reasons for the trek - if not the reason: land shortage. Some pointers to the background:

 

Little land had been granted since 1807 when the government was giving consideration to a new system of tenure: loan-place to quit-rent etc."

 

In 1813 Cradock said that he had at least 3,000 petitions for land.

 

In 1824 there were over 1,000 petitions for land in the Graaff Reinet district, by the end of that year only 140,352 morgen had been Graaff Reinet c 1870 William Row from www.graaffreinet.co.zagranted in the district.

 

In Graaff Reinet by the end of 1822, of 392 convertible loan farms 56 had been converted, and a further 301 applications were on file. As their petitions for new land were not dealt with until the titles of converted loan farms had been issued, and as few Boers had titles for their converted loan farms, they were unable legally to occupy new land. There arose 'request' places: land for which petitions had been submitted to the government, with the approval of the landrost, who often registered the claim in his books, although the government condemned the practice. In Graaff Reinet in 1824, there were at least 1,000 request places. (It is interesting to note that of the 19 men from the rural areas of the district who were reported to have joined the Great Trek by early 1837, 15 were described as having no fixed place of residence.)

 

By 1836, only 706 conversions on loan farms had been made which meant that there were still 1500 loan farms dating back to before 1813.

 

Meanwhile in 1832 the government, under orders from the Colonial Office, announced that all land applied for after 9 January 1832 would be sold only by public auction. Several historians emphasize this 'auction' decision in grievance list. There is much more material available to show the tremendous pressure that had arisen in the area of land usage/availability. Thus when d'Urban annexed 'Queen Adelaide Province,' the move was greatly welcomed by hundreds of land-hungry Boers who, at last, saw an advance of the frontier and the possibility of new farms. There are records of two, three Boer families at this time being 'forced' to exist on what their forefathers would've regarded as one unit i.e. 6,000 morgen. [approx 12,000 acres.]

 

The pressure on land had been aggravated by their family system. Though the Van Doorns don't typify it, it's a fact that families of a dozen children were the rule rather than the exception. When a son reached his age of independence, having by that time acquired his own horse, gun and small herd, it was traditional that he set his eyes to the east, to a loan place of his own and there establish his family till the same diffusion process started. (Of course, one sees an identical parallel in what was happening on the other side of the border with the young Xhosa herdsman who set out to establish his own kraal.) Now that the black barrier had stopped such an easy 'inheritance', and that people knew that to the immediate north lay the semi-Karoo and Karoo, there was bound to be a land shortage increased by the hour as Boer babies were born. In contrast to America, the whole impetus up to this generation was 'Go East!' - and thousands had.

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